Cherish Blurb

Hi Everyone,

What do you think of my blurb for my soon to be released young adult novel, Cherish :
“Sarah cannot escape the deadly Ludus–a mind-body dissociation game where bodies and souls don’t always merge after the game is over.”

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One thought on “Cherish Blurb

  1. It definitely sounds like it could be interesting, but your description is a little vague. Maybe instead of saying “bodies and souls don’t always merge” you could say something like “souls don’t always return to their bodies”?

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